I would like to believe my essay is very informative but still very entertaining so the readers don’t get bored. I perhaps could have used more quotes since I paraphrazed most of my quotes too. I honestly don’t think I could’ve put in more since the evidence I used was clear and relatable. Hopefully, everyone enjoys and is educated on my topic.

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